Hi I am Morgan. I am a eight student at Ngatea Primary School. My teacher's are Miss Willams,Miss Coles and Mrs Hull. Here you can look at my learning and work. Have fun and please comment!!
It sounds like you achieved your goals for camp. I hope you had a great time.
There are some errors in your before camp and after camp pictures, but since they are pictures I'm assuming you can't change them. Have another read through them and see what errors you can find anyway.
There are some problems in my before camp and I am correcting them below: * "Include" not "included" * "If I do" not "if do' * "speak" not "speck" * "week" not "way" * "through" not "though" * "skills" not "skill"
It sounds like you achieved your goals for camp. I hope you had a great time.
ReplyDeleteThere are some errors in your before camp and after camp pictures, but since they are pictures I'm assuming you can't change them. Have another read through them and see what errors you can find anyway.
There are some problems in my before camp and I am correcting them below:
ReplyDelete* "Include" not "included"
* "If I do" not "if do'
* "speak" not "speck"
* "week" not "way"
* "through" not "though"
* "skills" not "skill"
That looks better. When you're proof reading check for words that should have 'ed' on the end.
ReplyDelete