How many horse died? Many horses die but they did not count them.What would I be if I took a Part in war?I would be a nurse and help the hurt. What does it make me think about? All my family members that went to war a what they did to help. It also makes me think about why war stated which ends up leading in to big investigation.In the time she was at war did she make any friends? She had many friends and she was sad to see the ones that past away.How many nurse were set out to war? 20 nz nurse that help lots of injured men. What did the nurses wear?The nurse dresses that had hospital signs on them. How many nurse survived ? Lottie was one of 10 nurses who served on the first voyage of the New Zealand Hospital Ship Maheno, which went to the aid of the Anzac troops at Gallipoli.
Is this based on a book you read? How do the horses fit into the story about the nurses? You seem to have repeated your paragraph.
ReplyDeleteRemember to proof read and think about how to show the questions and answers rather than putting them into a long paragraph. You've started talking about 'she' before we know who 'she' is. Remember to put spaces after the full stops, and when you proof read check for where you should have 's' or 'ed' at the end of words
You've mis-spelt 'questions' in the first line and it should be 'passed away' not 'past away'.