Hi I am Morgan. I am a eight student at Ngatea Primary School. My teacher's are Miss Willams,Miss Coles and Mrs Hull. Here you can look at my learning and work. Have fun and please comment!!
:Last night the Black Caps played our big brothers Australia, we did not win but we tried really hard. The better team won, but it would have been awesome if NZ won.We have beaten them before, so hopefully we can bet the in the next world cup.
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Did you stay up to watch the game Morgan? Or did you give up when it became obvious that Australia was gong to win?
In the first sentence you've misspelled 'brothers' and should use 'tried' instead of 'try'. I think you need to put a comma or new sentence in after the word 'Australia'.
In the next sentence you need to put in a space and a capital letter to start, you've misspelled 'team', 'would', 'beat' and 'them'. You need a comma or a new sentence after the second 'won'.
Remember your proof reading, and checking that the automatic spelling corrections are using the right word.
Did you stay up to watch the game Morgan? Or did you give up when it became obvious that Australia was gong to win?
ReplyDeleteIn the first sentence you've misspelled 'brothers' and should use 'tried' instead of 'try'. I think you need to put a comma or new sentence in after the word 'Australia'.
In the next sentence you need to put in a space and a capital letter to start, you've misspelled 'team', 'would', 'beat' and 'them'. You need a comma or a new sentence after the second 'won'.
Remember your proof reading, and checking that the automatic spelling corrections are using the right word.
Looks a bit better now. Remember the spaces after your full stops. In the last sentence it should be 'beat them' not 'bet the'.
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