Hi I am Morgan. I am a eight student at Ngatea Primary School. My teacher's are Miss Willams,Miss Coles and Mrs Hull. Here you can look at my learning and work. Have fun and please comment!!
Hi Morgan. There are a couple of mistakes in the 'what do I think makes a good writer' section. You've mis-spelled 'whose', 'mistakes' and 'paragraphs'.
There are a couple of mistakes and I will list them below:
* 'Mistakes' not 'miststake' * 'whose ' not 'how' * 'mistake ' not 'miscake' * ' someone' not 'some' * 'paragraphs' not 'pragarth' * Full stop after me. *Comma's go straight after words with no space before.
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Hi Morgan. There are a couple of mistakes in the 'what do I think makes a good writer' section. You've mis-spelled 'whose', 'mistakes' and 'paragraphs'.
ReplyDeleteThere are a couple of mistakes and I will list them below:
ReplyDelete* 'Mistakes' not 'miststake'
* 'whose ' not 'how'
* 'mistake ' not 'miscake'
* ' someone' not 'some'
* 'paragraphs' not 'pragarth'
* Full stop after me.
*Comma's go straight after words with no space before.
Good job in identifying the mistakes
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