Goals for next week tech
- Cook with care to cook things to perfection.
- Have fun and try every thing.
- Learn more about food and what is the best food for me at what time.
Wednesday 4 March 2015
Tech
Today we had the fourth day of tech , we walked down to the college. I was in cooking and it was awesome we made french toast . We got into group of two , me and Sophie were together. We had a great time and I can not wait for next week.Overall it was an awesome day.
Goals for next week tech
Goals for next week tech
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Yum. How did you're French Toast turn out? Did you serve it with maple syrup?
ReplyDeleteRemember your proof reading goal. Your first bullet point doesn't sound right - try reading it aloud. You've made some of the same spelling mistakes as you did for last week's post about tech, and you're repeating what you've said previously.
Fixed it up now thanks.
ReplyDeleteIt still needs some work. In the first sentence you need to do something between the words 'tech' and 'we' as it doesn't make sense. Probably make it into a new sentence. 'walk' should be 'walked'. The second sentence needs an 'and' between 'cooking' and 'it'. The third sentence needs an 'and' as well. In the fourth sentence 'what' should be 'wait'.
ReplyDeleteUse these corrections to help fix the post on the cupcakes tech day.